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Just got back from a long weekend trip to find that my submission for the poetry contest was accepted! So happy right now just wanted to share wichoo guys ^^ I'm gonna start entering more cause yeah it's fun :D

 

Have you guys ever won before? I wanna read your poems!

 

p.s can view here http://www.neopets.com/contributions_poems.phtml

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Thank you :*

 

Yeah most of my stuff is definitely not neo appropriate xD My prize was a petpet worth 1 mil though so it's definitely worth going for!

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YAAYY!! *thows confetti*

THATS SO GOOD!!...nothing compared to my entries, you have quite a talent ^^ and congratulations on the petpet, how neat! :D

I've won twice

my first one was about altador..my second one reads as follows...

 

I traveled over land, sea, and mountain

In search of a magical fountain

I dream of a brand new coat

As I’m quite ordinary you’ll note

Maybe I’ll be painted faerie

Or even Christmas, how merry!

There’s silver, striped, and rainbow

Starry, spotted, and even snow

I always wanted to be painted cloud

Oh how my owner would be so proud

I once had a friend who was a Chombie

A splash in the pool and he turned zombie

Hopefully I won’t turn out grey

But if I do, it will be okay

So many possibilities await

Just step into the waters and meet your fate

 

 

 

...it's so short and cheesy XD

 

also on a side note :offtopic: It would be nice if a "search" option was added to some of the databases, like if someone say your lovely trophy and was wondering what you wrote they could search for it ;)

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I wrote one about Shenkuu River Rush and was rejected. Couldn't believe it, actually, as people really like my poetry and I've won awards for it. (If it was that bad, I wouldn't be waiting to hear how I did in an Irish poetry competition! E1k {approximately $1,375.72 USD, at the moment} to the winner. Plus publication and an invitation to speak at their book launch!)

 

Since we all seem to be using this opportunity to celebrate Saxen's win with Neopian poems of our own, I present "The River Rushes".

 

 

Before I head to the river each day,

I stop at the temple;

bow,

bend my knee

and pray.

The villagers can yell at me

all they want,

but there is no place in Shenkuu

I’d rather be.

I feel a breath of wind in my hair

as I grab my board

and prepare to launch.

I’ve been here so many times before

that I can see this course in my dreams.

I lean,

I spin,

I turn;

I grab my board

and do flips.

Tomami tail flare,

Quilin eclipse…

none of it matters,

as long as I’m here.

I have yet to meet a man

who is my match

in the surf

and the spray.

They may careen off the walls

and skim the ramps

with practiced ease,

but none of them know the river

as I do.

With each run,

I grow more daring,

so that I’m incredibly exhausted in the end.

It is all I can do

to pack my board

and head for the healing springs.

The lovely Marina waits for me

with a hot tub

and a towel;

a cool drink

and a query about the day.

With a faerie’s tender care,

I could surf forever.

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Congratulations on your well deserved win......

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Thanks so much everyone! And also for sharing your poems Shelley and Daya they're awesome :D

 

David I'll Skype you some of my non-neo stuff at some point :*

 

I agree about the 'search' feature, that would be really useful - like they have with the NT! Weird they don't have that...

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I just re-read what I wrote. "Speak at the anthology launch"? I'm dreaming. It's just an invitation to attend the launch, which I wouldn't be able to, because a mere three days in Ireland would be more than the prize money.

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Aww yeah :D No blushing, I can't wait to read it =] I'm sure it's great

 

Haha it's really not xP I'll send you some of my 'best' stuff now. Can't promise no blushing!

 

 

I just re-read what I wrote. "Speak at the anthology launch"? I'm dreaming. It's just an invitation to attend the launch, which I wouldn't be able to, because a mere three days in Ireland would be more than the prize money.

 

Oh man I'm sorry you can't go! Ireland would definitely be a bit of a trek D:

 

 

That's awesome, congratulations! I clicked the link to go read your poem and couldn't find it though.

 

Thank you :* It's been updated today it seems so my poem is no longer on the first page. I'll post it here ^^

 

Majestically he soars, with open wings

into the milky twilight above the clouds.

The air is fresh and sharp,

whistling past him as he darts

to and fro, laughing as he goes.

 

He is free here;

the wind speaks secrets of the night

as the sun says farewell,

revealing twinkling lights

and a moon that glows full.

 

He dreams to touch those sparkling diamonds

that seem to smile and somehow taunt,

as if aware of their splendid beauty

that shines out of reach

amid the blackness of the sky.

 

"Oh, what joy to fly beneath

the stars that burn with such intensity!

What utter repose it is to be

in a presence such as thee!"

 

A rumbling cumulus falls away,

unveiling below

the mighty tops of ashen trees,

that swoon with every gust of wind

making music with their leaves.

 

He spies those windows

of cosy abodes with chimneys smoking,

the thought of warmth envelops him

and, as the cold bites down,

he resolves to go back home.

 

"Until tomorrow stars that blaze!"

he cries into the evening sky.

"When deplete do the sun's rays

until tomorrow, I say goodbye!"

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I really loved your poem Saxen! It makes me want to try to enter the poetry contest even though I haven't written any poetry since high school.

 

Novelista, your poem is great, but I think it was rejected for the word "pray." Anything religious is not allowed on Neopets.

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congrats Saxen ... I'm really happy for you :D I mean FINALLLLLLYY WoooHooooo :D

 

I've won twice before .. one for Peophin Day and another for Jhudora Day .. (bet you'd like that one) ... the links are on my Screenies page :

 

http://www.neopets.com/~peopha

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Thank you :* I definitely would! It gets your creativeness a'goin and plus, if you get in you could win something worth a lotta moolah! ^^

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