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Hi, so today I spent like all day working on my About Me page, cause ive been meaning to have one for a while.

I know its unimportant, but I want it to look really amazing(Cause I mgiht use it when looking for a SuAP lender).

So I was wondering if you TDNers could tell me what you think? :)

 

http://www.neopets.com/~Cladisy

Thats the page.

Suggestions would be nice. :D

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So, Jessica, one of the main things you need to change about it is in a few cases, you're missing an apostrophe, or an uppercase I. Also, I think you'd be better off not having the scrollbar thingy and just have them scroll down naturally, but that's just me,

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I like it, a lot. I especially like the break down of your pets and I think it's very well laid out.

 

 

one of the main things you need to change about it is in a few cases, you're missing an apostrophe, or an uppercase I.

I agree with this, you just need to skim through it and correct the bits where you're missing an apostrophe.

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I enjoy putting on my penguin costume and walking around outside to freak people out.

 

Also, other stuff I do in my spare time is reading, and walking around in a penguin suit.

 

You mentioned your suit twice - if you changed the second one to something like "and of course walking around in my trusty penguin suit" it would make more sense.

 

Other than that it's a really good page (I do agree with what's said above though as well) :3 I need to make one of these for potential SuAP lenders XP

 

I also really thought you were a guy lol.

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I am a guy, actually. :D

Jessica is just a nickname that has stuck cause I use it in situations where I must be a girl.

Feepit Queen is, well... http://www.neopets.com/~Lenielle

And Chelle... DC inside joke. :D

 

 

 

 

But, but... i'm too lazy to go back and put in all those apostrophes. ;-;

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Just wondering, how much does a SuAP cost?

 

On topic, if you want a lender, Jessica, I would definitely change it so that the spelling and punctuation and grammar is all correct. That's something I'd look for if I were a SuAP lender.

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Hiya. I'm Ryan. Though I also respond to Jessica, The Feepit Queen, and occasionally Chelle. I'm a 15 year old living in Arizona with a slight addiction to Neopets, squirrels, and football. When not playing Madden or messing around on Neo, I enjoy putting on my penguin costume and walking around outside to freak people out. Thats really all you need about me. :)

 

But since you insist on knowing more, let me go into my Neo life. I'm an ACer. Not avvie collector (although I do enjoy that as a side hobby), but an Altador Cup player. I love my team, I love the tournament(when it's not being ruined by TNT), and I love to win.

During the AC off-season I usually just chill with my fellow Minions at the DC Minions board in VPC. I also play Keyquest, Neoquest, collect avatars, do some BD training, and work on whatever my current goal is - usually something for my (AC themed) gallery.

Btw, I collect tomatoes. Sometimes I throw them at people, but they usually just stay safely hidden in my SDB.

 

...And then there's my real life, because, unfortunately, one exists.

As I've stated, I'm a 15 year old living in Arizona. I've lived here all my life, and I don't think I'd ever want to leave, despite the unbearable heat...

I'm on the chess team cause I'm a legit nerd, but I also love football. Like, in under two years I've put almost a thousand hours into my Madden game. Plus when an NFL game is happening, i'm usually glued to a TV (btw, my favourite teams are the Bears and The Cardinals). Other stuff I like to do in my spare time include reading, and walking around in my aforementioned penguin suit. That's all you really need in life to be happy. :D

 

I was bored so I edited it for you. You don't have

 

Edit: The side-panel.

I'm Ryan/Jessica/The Feepit Queen in case you didn't know. Most of the stuff here is already known by friends, but if you're not my friend yet it should be useful you odd little creeper. C:

This is just a fun little side project I've been meaning to do for a while. This thing probably won't be updated very often, so keep that in mind.

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I like the page - the Feepits make a great break from text. The only thing I would change is, as mentioned, the scroll thing. It makes the page smaller than it is and by extension, more cluttered than it really is.

 

Also, (sidenote) had it not been for the fact that you're from Arizona, I would've sworn that you were one of students - they also have this ongoing war with apostrophes :P

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