Wembly Posted June 4, 2010 Posted June 4, 2010 So I decided to draw a yooyu the other day and it kind of is turning into what I imagine could be a comic and I was wondering what people thought. Is it amusing? Has this already been done to death? I don't really read the Neopian Times which is where I think I will eventually submit this when done so thoughts on that would be great too. Or if you've got better text for my comic that's cool too. I know that is really terribly quality picture but its just a sketch as of now so I was too lazy to do better/find and connect a scanner. Or if you've got a witty title that would be awesome too. So the premise is that a regular yooyu is given a slushie, he gets brain freeze and turns into a snow yooyu. Note in the last one, he's snow but you can't tell without the it being colored yet. My other thoughts were to possibly add in the jelly chia laughing at the end since the yooyu would be slower and easier to stop. Also I am aware that this might supposed to be in the art forum but I figured here was cool too since its about the Altador Cup, if not, sorry. Also its kind of large so its in a spoiler thingy. Edit: Added the color and chia!
nikh Posted June 4, 2010 Posted June 4, 2010 It's cool! Hope you finish the comic and publish it in the Neopian times! :laughingsmiley: :laughingsmiley:
tempdisplay Posted June 5, 2010 Posted June 5, 2010 The art is brilliant! I think the idea might have bee done before, but I'm not an avid NT reader either. But to be safe, add the Chia, it's funny and unique :yes:
-Ryan Posted June 5, 2010 Posted June 5, 2010 The color and chia will make it absolutley hilarious I think. xDDD
Wembly Posted June 10, 2010 Author Posted June 10, 2010 Added the color, I enjoy how it came out so far. Anyone know how to easily make all the backgrounds the same shade of white?
Tyler. Posted June 10, 2010 Posted June 10, 2010 now that the colors and chia are there, it's awesome
Anisha Posted June 10, 2010 Posted June 10, 2010 :laughingsmiley: Piece of awesomeness. This comic would pwn in the neopian times!
Divya Bean Posted June 10, 2010 Posted June 10, 2010 Love it! Gorgeous, funny, and brilliant! You should definitely try to get this published in the NT!
Secre Posted June 10, 2010 Posted June 10, 2010 That works really well. It's amusing and fantastically well drawn - I'd submit it and see how it goes.
nikh Posted June 11, 2010 Posted June 11, 2010 It's cool when it's coloured! Way to go! :graduated: :graduated:
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