Snowbell Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 I made three designs 1. Baby Draik - http://impress.openneo.net/outfits/681451 2.Baby Gelert - http://impress.openneo.net/outfits/681462 I CREATED A NEW DESIGN: http://impress.openneo.net/outfits/685710 3. Stealthy Cybunny - http://impress.openneo.net/outfits/683528 Just let me know what you think/ if you have any suggestions etc. Thank you ^__^ edit: You can completely redesign the second one if you like. I was trying to keep a spring theme for baby neopets. *critique I cannot believe I forgot an (i) of well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily_speck_15 Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Draik... love it! If you want you can add Flowering Vine String Lights but you don't have to. http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=6&objects[]=56708&objects[]=55924&objects[]=69593&species=10&state=16878&search_offset=128&search=flower+fits%3Ababy-draik Gelert... Not a huge fan of the background. Perfer either the raspberry patch, spring courtyard or spring path. I added a tree. http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=6&objects[]=69801&objects[]=66885&objects[]=69220&objects[]=66417&objects[]=44915&species=14&state=3012&search_offset=312&search=occupies%3Abackgrounditem+fits%3Ababy-gelert&closet[]=44915&closet[]=69801&closet[]=66417&closet[]=66885&closet[]=22952&closet[]=61275&closet[]=69220&closet[]=54745 Here I added two trees. http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=6&objects[]=66885&objects[]=66417&objects[]=44915&objects[]=54745&objects[]=69801&objects[]=69220&species=14&state=3012&search_offset=0&search=+fits%3Ababy-gelert&closet[]=44915&closet[]=69801&closet[]=66417&closet[]=66885&closet[]=22952&closet[]=61275&closet[]=69220&closet[]=54745 Bunny...Stop. Don't you DARE change a single thing!! I LOVE it!!! Snowbell 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katsuokai Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Your customizations are quite nice! ;) Baby neopets can be hard to customize since they can't wear all the nice clothing items the other pets have. The first customization is really cute, but maybe two wearables are somewhat too few items? I would probably have added more stuff (I haven't really customized baby neopets before so I'm not sure), but I think in the case of baby neopets keeping it ''simple'' might be the way to go. The customization is really nice, after all. Maybe you could add flowers of some sort or beams or faerie dust to it? The second outfit is also nice although a bit simple, it could do with some extra items. I like the third outfit best, but... maybe that Cybunny would look nice with a dark purple dress? Really, I think it all depends on what type of image you're looking after. Does your pets have a specific backstory as to why they look like that? That could help you decide whether you should include more wearables or change anything. ^_^Oh, now I've seen Emily's suggestions. I agree with her, I don't like that background too much but the trees makes it better! There are lots of neopoint trees available, so you should be able to find something to your liking. :) emily_speck_15 and Snowbell 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sabs Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Hey, I wasn't sure if anything was limited to NP or NC, so I added just a couple of items the 3rd custom. 1. I love this baby draik custom! :) That background is really pretty, and doesn't really need anything extra to me. Adding a foreground or trinket, might clutter the customization. 2. I agree with Emily about adding the Blushing Birch tree with the Lovely Spring Morning. It brings out the purple flowers in the background. =) I would also take the snorkle balloon out and bear. 3. I really like the color scheme for the stealth cybunny! I think it would look nice if there was an outfit to go with the hood. I added the Shenkuu cybunny slippers, Neovian cybunny gentleman cape, and Shenkuu cybunny dress.(all items found in the shop). emily_speck_15 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breaziecat Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 The first two are adorable! The last one...Is kind of lacking. I like what you've done but I think it needs more clothes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowbell Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 Draik... love it! If you want you can add Flowering Vine String Lights but you don't have to. http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=6&objects[]=56708&objects[]=55924&objects[]=69593&species=10&state=16878&search_offset=128&search=flower+fits%3Ababy-draik&closet[]=56708&closet[]=55924&closet[]=69593 Gelert... Not a huge fan of the background. Perfer either the raspberry patch, spring courtyard or spring path. I added a tree. http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=6&objects%5B%5D=69801&objects%5B%5D=66885&objects%5B%5D=69220&objects%5B%5D=66417&objects%5B%5D=44915&species=14&state=3012&search_offset=312&search=occupies%3Abackgrounditem+fits%3Ababy-gelert&closet%5B%5D=44915&closet%5B%5D=69801&closet%5B%5D=66417&closet%5B%5D=66885&closet%5B%5D=22952&closet%5B%5D=61275&closet%5B%5D=69220&closet%5B%5D=54745 Here I added two trees. http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=6&objects[]=66885&objects[]=66417&objects[]=44915&objects[]=54745&objects[]=69801&objects[]=69220&species=14&state=3012&search_offset=88&search=tree+fits%3Ababy-gelert&closet[]=44915&closet[]=69801&closet[]=66417&closet[]=66885&closet[]=22952&closet[]=61275&closet[]=69220&closet[]=54745]http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=6&objects[]=66885&objects[]=66417&objects[]=44915&objects[]=54745&objects[]=69801&objects[]=69220&species=14&state=3012&search_offset=0&search=+fits%3Ababy-gelert&closet[]=44915&closet[]=69801&closet[]=66417&closet[]=66885&closet[]=22952&closet[]=61275&closet[]=69220&closet[]=54745 Bunny...Stop. Don't you DARE change a single thing!! I LOVE it!!! aww thank you so much! Now that I am thinking about it I'm having second thoughts about the baby Gelert's background. The Cybunny design took the longest, I am so glad you like it! @sabs I really like that dress I might add it!! thank you I will take that extra stuff out from the gelert I dont think I need them. The first two are adorable! The last one...Is kind of lacking. I like what you've done but I think it needs more clothes. Sabs suggested a dress that goes with the earings. I always try not to cover up all the original designs and fur but you have a point :) This post has been edited by a member of staff (Ruto) because of a violation of the forum rules. Please don't double or triple post. Use the edit button if you have something to add. Please check your user inbox to see if you have been contacted regarding this incident, then review our rules. @emily_speck_15 wow I really love that design! And I can still see the fur, thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily_speck_15 Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 I added some clothes (a dress and a cape) that don't cover up the neck fluff. http://impress.openneo.net/wardrobe#color=99&objects[]=68626&objects[]=66809&objects[]=66121&objects[]=44776&objects[]=60519&objects[]=53189&objects[]=46887&objects[]=62496&species=9&state=21347&search_offset=56&search=black+fits%3Astealthy-cybunny&closet[]=46887&closet[]=68626&closet[]=53189&closet[]=66809&closet[]=66121&closet[]=60519&closet[]=44776&closet[]=54832&closet[]=62496 Snowbell 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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