Critique My Art

[Travisaurus]

I will be uploading pictures that I have created in Photoshop here. Please critique them! I am looking for constructive criticism to help me grow as an artist. This is my most recent creation. The last two pictures are going to be two different finishes that I put onto the photo's. The last one is the one I prefer, but the second last one is the one I gave to my girlfriend as a gift.

 

NOTE: It may help to take a step back from your screen to view these :P

 

My first post in this thread is going to show each step that I did in the process so that, perhaps, somebody can critique even as deep as how I go about my art.

 

Thanks for being awesome!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[youngrace]

very cute! i like how you softened things a bit towards the end. keep up the great work ^_^

[HimitsuTenshin]

I really like it! :O I wish I could draw like that!

 

But sadly, my dogs/cats/horses/worms all look the same xD

[redfire77]

nice lineart, but you should have consistent lighting :P for example, the sun/light source is to the right of yoshi, but the highlights on yoshi are on the left :P my deviantart is malloweater.deviantart.com if you want to see some examples

[GlitteryCupcake]

I really like the glowy effect of your coloring! My main critique would be to make the lines smoother. They look a bit choppy to me. Maybe you could refine the edge by smoothing it? If you have any questions about how to do that I'd be happy to help. Still, it's a nice job overall!