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Coltzan poems


Alynniae

  

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sooo... because of tank girl, who won the last poem contest, i decided to try it.

The whole coltzan thing, i wasn't there :sad01_anim: , too bad...

But the whole coverage(it's small!!!) is on neopets, so I decided to make a poem about the search for the crown:

 

The crown of Coltzan,

stolen in a silent rush.

The only thing left,

a note to all of us.

 

The pets teamed up,

the start of a quest.

They had to find the crown,

so they had to be fast.

 

A journey through the world,

the search continued everywere.

The clues keeped piling on,

and pets helped here and there.

 

Nothing kept them from searching,

stopping the villains for good.

'cause you can't stop the ones,

who worked with everything they could.

 

The journey was rewarded,

the crown was finally found.

The seekers were thanked,

by the people around.

 

But the greatest thank you,

to those seekers so unafraid.

Was the great adventure,

and the friendships they'd made.

 

(hope you all like it)

 

that's my entry, but what are YOU going to enter???

I hope they like it, i don't think i'll win the first time, but hey, i just try, and i liked it, so i'm going to do this more than once, for fun:-P

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That's really good! Well done. I hope you get in ^_^

 

yeah, yours was also GREAT!!!

i've read it, it's awesome, you deserved to win!

now, i'm holding my fingers acrossed(even when i'm sleeping :laughingsmiley: )

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I entered ... took an entirely different approach to Coltzan though ...

 

hope you and I both get in :)

 

EDIT:

 

SPEAK OF THE DEVIL !!!!!!!!!!! I JUST CHECKED MY NEOPETS AND ......

 

8/7/2011 09:26am

Folder: Inbox

Subject: Your Poetry Contest submission

Message:

 

[Report Message]

Dear Angelo,

 

Your entry for Poetry Contest has been held over by the judges. While this does not mean that you have won, it does mean that you have made a good first impression and they have saved your entry for closer consideration. That is a good sign. ;)

 

We just want to make sure you are aware of this in case you had it in mind to change your entry. It would probably be best not to at this point. ;)

 

So congratulations! If the status of your entry changes after further perusal, you will be notified.

 

Sincerely,

Poetry Contest Judges

 

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Added notes from the judge:

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Golden Coltzan Statue has been held over.

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I entered ... took an entirely different approach to Coltzan though ...

 

hope you and I both get in :)

 

EDIT:

 

SPEAK OF THE DEVIL !!!!!!!!!!! I JUST CHECKED MY NEOPETS AND ......

 

8/7/2011 09:26am

Folder: Inbox

Subject: Your Poetry Contest submission

Message:

 

[Report Message]

Dear Angelo,

 

Your entry for Poetry Contest has been held over by the judges. While this does not mean that you have won, it does mean that you have made a good first impression and they have saved your entry for closer consideration. That is a good sign. ;)

 

We just want to make sure you are aware of this in case you had it in mind to change your entry. It would probably be best not to at this point. ;)

 

So congratulations! If the status of your entry changes after further perusal, you will be notified.

 

Sincerely,

Poetry Contest Judges

 

---------------

Added notes from the judge:

---------------

Golden Coltzan Statue has been held over.

 

 

that's great!!!

I've heard nothing, but i've just entered so i think they haven't read it yet, hope you get in!!

if I don't win, i want you to win, hopefully, we win both:-P

 

 

 

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mine is also held over, OMG!!!!

maybe we'll both win, my first entry and it's held over, yes!

hope soooo we're going to win!

Edited by lisauntie
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that's a great idea Tankie ... will it be normal poetry or Neopets-related poetry ??

 

both, or 2 pinned topics, one for each of them :laughingsmiley:

it would be a great idea, maybe one of us 3 could ask it.

me not, i'm not the best at english grammar, as a dutch girl... :whistle:

but yeah, it would be great if there is a topic where people can post their poetry and where people can react to it, because those topics seem to appear like mushrooms in fall... and 1 topic is handy :king:

does anybody know when they tell you if you've won? :sad01_anim: i don't know it :laughingsmiley:

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I think it should be both so that everyone who likes poetry is posting in the same area :) Would be really cool! :D

 

They tell you you've won when they post it up. At least that's what happened with me. I got held over before but they didn't use my poem :/ I'm still hoping they will but it doesn't look hopeful.

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