Angeló Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 I submitted this poem 3 weeks ago ... and still no reply from TNT ... tell me what you think please Gentlemen , ready you gear ACVI is almost here Eighteen teams, they all clash for the cup But only one can be on top Moltara have the magma pool Faerieland got the rainbow fountain But can they be as cool As Kiko Lake or Terror Mountain? It's looking good for Kreludor and Maraqua the warrior fishes But Shenkuu are back for more and Altador hold it in their dearest wishes Lost Desert and Tyrannia Rough ancient lands in their nature But Roo Island got the laughing mania and Virtupets claim to be the future Along come the sworn brothers Meridell and Brightvale But Mystery Island is a big bother And will their slushies better Krawks Ale? This leaves us only with the scariest of all Their bite is worse than their bark Haunted Woods and Darigan Citadel Can they bring the cup to the lands of dark? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wistiria12 Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 Oh...My...God...That's...The most beautiful AC poem i've ever red.Good for you Angelo :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tank Girl Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 That's really good Angelo, well done! :D My only suggestion would be to put in a bit of punctuation here and there. All in all though an excellent poem :) I hope TNT get back to you!! My Koi Day poem didn't make it this year so I'm gonna try again next time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airotia Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 :O It is a really really good overall poem for the Altador Cup! Heck, it sounds like an Altador Cup anthem, if you will. ;3 Good job, I really like it! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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