Maryyam Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 hi guy's, i'm writing a couple of stories online and would love some feedback. "All Boys School Survival guide" for girls AKA "[RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed" Synopsis: Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her hissis constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have the start of a chaotic relationship-if you can even call it that. http://www.wattpad.com/257206-restricted-no-girls-allowed ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mr. Holier Then Thou Excerpt: GASP Méav woke up with a jerk. Her hands were both clenched together as though she was holding on to dear life and her arm-hair were standing on ends. She took a deep breath and calmed her speeding heart. "It was only a dream..." He's not going to do anything to me. The incident had happened ten summers ago. Yet Méav could still feel his lips moving across her own. She touched her lower lips tentatively, and softly moved her finger across them. I'm not a nine years old child anymore. He cannot do such things to me, and he never will. Not after today. Today her life would change irrevocably after the Cullen Ceremony. Six years had passed since her women's flux had started and the ceremony was taking place on her nineteenth summer. From this day onwards, she would serve her Fae master. http://www.wattpad.com/270575-mr-holier-then-thou This topic has been edited by a member of staff (Ruto). The topic was posted in the wrong area. Please check your user inbox to see if you have been contacted regarding this topic. Per the reason above, this topic has been MOVED from 'Random Chit Chat' to ' Artistic Expressions: Drawings and Writings'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domino Posted January 29, 2010 Share Posted January 29, 2010 Ohmigoodness. "All Boys School Survival guide" for girls AKA "[RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed" is AMAZING. I absolutely love it. I definetly just read the whole thing in the last hour. Please keep writing. :D, it was....i have no words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maryyam Posted January 29, 2010 Author Share Posted January 29, 2010 Ohmigoodness. "All Boys School Survival guide" for girls AKA "[RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed" is AMAZING. I absolutely love it. I definetly just read the whole thing in the last hour. Please keep writing. :D, it was....i have no words. aww thx, i really appreciate you reading it, i am going to write the next chap tmw, so i hope u enjoy it, i think ur the one who left the comment about joining wattpad because of my story, that made my day :* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSoappp Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 I agree with Domino. I love "All Boys School Survival guide" AKA "[RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed." I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tirian Posted January 31, 2010 Share Posted January 31, 2010 I love RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed :D It reminds me of she's the man :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maryyam Posted January 31, 2010 Author Share Posted January 31, 2010 I agree with Domino. I love "All Boys School Survival guide" AKA "[RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed." I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^^ thx, have u read holier then thou, it's newer, but the writing style is completely different (it's more me...) if yo do, let me know what you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maryyam Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 I love RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed :D It reminds me of she's the man :P lol i wasn't even thinking of she's the man when i wrote the story, i had recently watched a korean drama called 'you're beautiful' and thats where i got the idea from :laughingsmiley: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSoappp Posted February 3, 2010 Share Posted February 3, 2010 Ohh. You're Beautiful is a great drama. ^^ I loved it! Now that I think about it, [RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed and You're Beautiful are a bit similar. :3 By the way, Holier Then Thou was great. >w< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maryyam Posted February 6, 2010 Author Share Posted February 6, 2010 Ohh. You're Beautiful is a great drama. ^^ I loved it! Now that I think about it, [RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed and You're Beautiful are a bit similar. :3 By the way, Holier Then Thou was great. >w< yeah, but i am trying to make it as different as possible right now, and holier than thou has been this fantasy that i have always had, so i just needed to put it to use and get it out of my system, i'm glad u like it, but i always wonder, which story do you like more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSoappp Posted February 6, 2010 Share Posted February 6, 2010 I tend to like realistic stories more than fiction, so I'd go with [RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed. ^^ But Holier Then Thou was great. c: When is the next chapter for [RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed coming out? O: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maryyam Posted February 6, 2010 Author Share Posted February 6, 2010 I tend to like realistic stories more than fiction, so I'd go with [RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed. ^^ But Holier Then Thou was great. c: When is the next chapter for [RESTRICTED] No Girls Allowed coming out? O: lol i just posted it right now :D hope u enjoy it :laughingsmiley: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vivien Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 the boys school one may be a bit of a plagiarism breach :/ your synopsis seems to be taken from the popular Japanese manga 'Hanazakari no Kimitachi e (for you in full blossom)' with names changed This topic has been edited by a member of staff (Anime) because of a violation of the forum rules. Do not post on topics that have been inavtice for more than three weeks. Please check your user inbox to see if you have been contacted regarding this incident, then review our rules. Per the reason above, this topic has been LOCKED. Please contact Anime if you have any questions regarding this action. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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