Compilation of Poetry

[Captain Awesome Pants]

So, I'm kind of into poetry right now. It's nothing great, sure, but I was hoping you all could be the lovely critics you are and help me improve. I'll link to all of my poems I've put up and then add more as they come.

 

Oh, and often there is an explanation in the authors' comments, so if you want my explanation, then look there.

 

Identity

The Chill

My Not Love Letter To You

Just Miss Me Already

Romantic Antics

Flight l e s s

Hobbledehoy

 

I've got more other places, but they haven't been uploaded yet...

[livvy]

Well done Laura! Most of them are fairly short, but I liked them. The Chill, on the other hand - The Chill is absolutely beautiful. I sang it in my head, and I daresay it was the sweetest love song / lullaby I've ever not-exactly-heard. Brilliant piece, my friend. =]

[Captain Awesome Pants]

Yeah, I'm not big on long things unless I just can't stop.

 

Thank you! :D It was based loosely off of a lullabye. At least the ending was.

[ΩCCΩ]

Your poems are really good, especially The Chill :wub_anim:. You should try writing some more ;).

[Unstream]

I guess me being a guy I missed the meaning of The Chill (either that or I'm just not really that bright). :P

 

I liked your poems though. Especially My Not Love Letter To You. It had a great rhythm and I felt like it had a pretty cool message. It was really good :)

[Captain Awesome Pants]

Thanks CC. :D

 

Eh, there was a vague message to The Chill. But blah. And thanks. :D

 

Murgh. There is another one. *pokes OP*

[tirian]

Wow! They were absolutely awesome! :D I love The Chill especially :)

[Captain Awesome Pants]

Oh haha, thank you! :D I don't think they're really deserving of such praise, though. You're simply too kind. :yes: