Captain Awesome Pants Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 So, I'm kind of into poetry right now. It's nothing great, sure, but I was hoping you all could be the lovely critics you are and help me improve. I'll link to all of my poems I've put up and then add more as they come. Oh, and often there is an explanation in the authors' comments, so if you want my explanation, then look there. Identity The Chill My Not Love Letter To You Just Miss Me Already Romantic Antics Flight l e s s Hobbledehoy I've got more other places, but they haven't been uploaded yet... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livvy Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 Well done Laura! Most of them are fairly short, but I liked them. The Chill, on the other hand - The Chill is absolutely beautiful. I sang it in my head, and I daresay it was the sweetest love song / lullaby I've ever not-exactly-heard. Brilliant piece, my friend. =] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Awesome Pants Posted January 17, 2010 Author Share Posted January 17, 2010 Yeah, I'm not big on long things unless I just can't stop. Thank you! :D It was based loosely off of a lullabye. At least the ending was. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ΩCCΩ Posted January 22, 2010 Share Posted January 22, 2010 Your poems are really good, especially The Chill :wub_anim:. You should try writing some more ;). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unstream Posted January 23, 2010 Share Posted January 23, 2010 I guess me being a guy I missed the meaning of The Chill (either that or I'm just not really that bright). :P I liked your poems though. Especially My Not Love Letter To You. It had a great rhythm and I felt like it had a pretty cool message. It was really good :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Awesome Pants Posted January 24, 2010 Author Share Posted January 24, 2010 Thanks CC. :D Eh, there was a vague message to The Chill. But blah. And thanks. :D Murgh. There is another one. *pokes OP* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tirian Posted February 5, 2010 Share Posted February 5, 2010 Wow! They were absolutely awesome! :D I love The Chill especially :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Awesome Pants Posted February 5, 2010 Author Share Posted February 5, 2010 Oh haha, thank you! :D I don't think they're really deserving of such praise, though. You're simply too kind. :yes: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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