I'm upset. Someone have advice?

[Deepti M.]

Yes, I agree, the text is a bit too small, which makes it look very wordy, and gives off the appeal of not wanting to read it.

[Tamara]

I guess I still have a bit of tweeking and editing to do. Unfortunately, there isn't much I can do about the text. It is, afterall, an application and a lot of word are inevitable. As for the text size, I'm worried if I make it any bigger that it might look even worse like a block of text. The smaller texts gives it more organization, no?

 

Really why weren't you accepted?

Its not that I wasn't accepted. Its the fact that most of the people who looked at my app on the BC forums didn't like it.

 

In terms of all the reading, the adopter will inevitably have to read it regardless. Perhaps its not very appealing to others beside the adopters - but some people don't like to read very much. By reducing the amount of text; it takes away from my genuine interest [i believe].

 

I might be changing the header image today. Afterall, I still have until the end of the week. I MIGHT do a comic for the story, and stick images between the paragraphs; but like I said before... I don't want to invest so much time into this and then end up with a broken heart.

 

But... we'll see what happens.