Guest Levy Posted February 17, 2008 Posted February 17, 2008 You guys have seen it by now. Incase you haven't, here it is. I would like your opinions about it. And no sugar coating it. Tell me what I did wrong or right or what needs improving or everything I may have missed. The only way to improve is to be critiqued honestly. If your critique insults my work, have at it. If it gets you in trouble, I'll talk to a staff member. Just no cussing or anything worse, I can't protect you from that punishment. Below are the two images I used. The first is the render of the dragon, the other is the city picture, which is Seattle I believe. http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f383/tee...ther/Dragon.png http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f383/tee...46_90914095.jpg Thank you. Quote
antiaircraft Posted February 17, 2008 Posted February 17, 2008 Well if you look at the right wing in the siggy, the point where the flames meet the large indentation in the wing looks a bit weird - it kinda seems like the flames are merging with the wing at first glance. Either that or it's just my headache. :yes: Perhaps the dark background that can be seen through the hole is interfering with the contrast between the flame and the wing? Note: if this doesn't make sense, just ignore it. I have a mild fever and a splitting headache right now. Quote
DOOM Bringer Posted February 17, 2008 Posted February 17, 2008 I think it looks really cool. I don't know much (if anything) about art and stuff like that but I think it looks really good. I like the colours and I think you did a nice job of darkening the city to suit the dragon. I have no criticisms, most likely because I don't know enough about art to make one :P Great job Levy :D Quote
Guest Levy Posted February 17, 2008 Posted February 17, 2008 Note: if this doesn't make sense, just ignore it. I have a mild fever and a splitting headache right now. Yikes, hope you feel better soon. :axehead: Quote
antiaircraft Posted February 18, 2008 Posted February 18, 2008 I'm feeling better now. :yes: I can't think of any more critique to give - it's an awesome set all in all. Quote
Revenge Posted February 18, 2008 Posted February 18, 2008 There's really not that much to be done about it. It's cool, I'm using it, and if there was any problems with it, I wouldn't be. Don't sweat yourself! :P Quote
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