Guest Levy Posted September 25, 2007 Share Posted September 25, 2007 http://levy-wilson.deviantart.com/art/Stop-Crying-65782546 This is a very sad piece I wrote today. As the main character dies, these are his final thoughts to his lover as she cries over his body. ((This piece is label mature because it has descriptions of his wounds, you will need to sign in to dA in order to read it.)) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dillon Posted September 25, 2007 Share Posted September 25, 2007 You write great poetry. but some words were cut off. =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Levy Posted September 25, 2007 Share Posted September 25, 2007 You write great poetry. but some words were cut off. =/ This isn't poetry, its a fictional story segment. I am thinking of writing an entire story and adding something like this as the ending. And the cut off? It is part of the dA interface, it might act strange on some computers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusher Posted September 26, 2007 Share Posted September 26, 2007 That was truly incredible. Kudos to you. Crusher Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antiaircraft Posted September 26, 2007 Share Posted September 26, 2007 I like it, even if it saddens me somewhat. It seems that I have some superiors on these forums as far as writing is concerned. :P *wishes as many people as this commented on my writing topics* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusher Posted September 27, 2007 Share Posted September 27, 2007 Certainly, this is a great forum for those with good English skills. Although I think this is partially due to the tough spam and chatspeak rules, there is no denying that there are many active people on The Daily Neopets Forum who have excellent grammatical and spelling skills. I am usually classed above average in terms of English, but with people like Levy and AA here, I have well and truly met my match. This was an incredibly touching piece of work, Levy. I loved it. Crusher Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Levy Posted September 27, 2007 Share Posted September 27, 2007 Thank you very much, I might take this piece and add more story to it later. I already have and idea for a plot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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