Aleiati Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 I want you all to know that if youve seeen this somewhere before, its most likely you saw it at http://www.neopets.com/~coral_rivers10023334 From the Rp version of this magigi. The story will start off with the pre-written prologue (BY MOI) and i shall continue from there. **PLEASE NOTE** This is basicly as simular as Erin Hunter's writing style as possible. so there will be DEATHS, FIGHTS, AND VIOLENCE. Make sure any readers under the age of 8 doesnt read this, I dun wanna give a bad impression ^.~ CHAPTER 1/PROLOGUE THE NEW BEGINNING Serenestar sat down in the shadows of her den. Her green eyes sparkled with loss and memory as her mind reeled back when it all happened... it all started when Serenestar, then Sereneheart, had a dream. it was strange, she recalled the voices of Starclan tingling in her mind. A new path will begin with sacrifices and losses, but out of the pool of blood will show a new leader, a new way, a new clan. Sereneheart shivered visibly as the onimous words had a hint of a threat in them. She woke up later, feeling light-headed and dizzy. She stumbled out of her den, and began to munch on a rather crunchy mouse, when she saw Dreamwing, returning in the state of shock. Sereneheart always knew Dreamwing had a dream, to become a great leader. Rigidstar padded out of his den by the hollowed area and licked Dreamwing soothingly. "Whats wrong?" ".. its Thrushleg! His leg was crippled! And hes terribly hurt!" Suddenly Rigidstar's eyes grew wild and he sat up indignately. "WHY DID YOU DO THAT!" he yowled. Dreamwing jumped, her eyes were growing wider, and Sereneheart scented the purgent smell of fear comming off her in waves. "Rigidstar! I didnt do it! Sereneheart sent me on Dawn Patrol with him and Lushleaf!" Rigidstar's eyes narrowed further. Sereneheart flinched. She remembered how she ordered that exact patrol earlier at the clearing; but Rigidstar didnt seem to hear the first part of Dreamwing's explanation. "So you take out Lushleaf; then cripple Thrushleg's leg?!" he yowled. Then he seemed very old. "Dreamwing. Im very angry with you." His eyes narrowed until they were beady black slits. He lepted up the Highrock and yowled the summons. At once all the warriors came from behind the nursery and pushed through the thorn tunnel to get to the other half of the camp. "I have before us a traitor. Dreamwing. I called you all here to tell you... she is... BANISHED!" his last word was a yowl, and caused a confused Caterwaul from all the cats surrounding. Dreamwing stiffened, then her eyes sparkled with so much anger, all the cats winced as if she went on fire. "How dare you!" she screeched angrily. "I did not do anything. Yet you punish me for bringing back grave news?? In fact; I dont care. I am now called Lostdream, and it was YOU, Rigidstar, who drove me to this state!!" Her claws unsheathed, and most cats thought she was going to attack her former leader, before her eyes closed and were clouded with confusion, rage, and weariness, then, after brief hesistation, ran out of camp, yowling as if all the cats from starclan had just clawed her. Sereneheart watched her go sadly, and many other cats bowed thier head as if they had lost a comrad, and in a way they did, because Lostdream will never be with them anymore. She spotted a pair of golden eyes that reflected Serenehearts grief and some furiness from Lostdream. Sereneheart could understand why her eyes looked like that; it was Shiningdust, thier medicine cat. Their eyes met for a moment, before Shiningdust padded back into her den. Sereneheart narrowed her eyes. This was just the begining. the next day Sereneheart realized she hasnt seen Thrushleg anywhere, though Lushleaf was back in the den. She got up and shook her pelt vigurously. Maybe he went out hunting earlier. She scraped her claws against the ground. She needed Thrushleg for a patrol. She poked her head into Rigidstar's den to see if he was in there, but his den was empty, and by the smell of it; it seemed as if he went out early too. Sereneheart narrowed her eyes as she padded out the entrance.Instantly, she picked up a scent of Rigidstar, and it turned to confusion as it almost overpowered Thrushleg's scent, as if she wasnt the only one looking for him. She sniffed again. She remebered she sent the patrol towards the Silver River, so she began to head towards the waterfilled river. She sniffed again, and it turned to confusion as she detected Thrushleg's scent again, yet it seemed a wee bit fainter. She tried to pinpoint the smell, but she was confused yet again but the recent scent of Rigidstar, as if he was trying to overlay his scent ontop of Thrushleg's. She began to follow the scent again, and this time the path veered sharply towards Mothermouth. Then thats where she found it. Tracks. very strange; unnatural tracks. And blood. lots of it. This seems to be the spot where Thrushleg injured his leg. She padded forward determindly, when she ended going to the sand pit, when she was just intime to see Thrushleg leaning heavily against a tree, while- Sereneheart gasped- Rigidstar, was trying to bite his neck. "Why? why? wh-" Thrushleg gasped, as if trying to reason with his leader. But he never did; as his third try was cut short. Sereneheart took a step back. "n-no..." she mewed quietly, as Rigidstar spat out Thrushleg's brown fur beside the unmoving shape. Sereneheart raced out of the trees and confronted her leader. "Why did you do such a thing Rigidstar?" she yowled angrily. "Because he is now useless. We all know any cat with a crippled leg cant do anything." He hissed, his eyes narrowing. "Now..." but he never finished. Sereneheart guessed what was going to happen next. He was going to kill her. She was very scared, it was only two sunrises ago when Rigidstar hadnt gone insane. She raced back to camp, then bolted into the Medicine cat den, where Shiningdust looked at her very strangely. "You seem rather scared." she commented, her golden eyes gentle. "Yes, yes! Rigidstar.. he killed... Thrushleg!" She panted. "What???" Shiningdust exclaimed. "Yes. yes. its true. its a matter of time before he kills all of us. He already tried to kill me already!" "he did?" Shiningdust mewed louder. "Yes!" "Dear starclan! We must do something fast, before this gets out of hand!" She closed her eyes. "While I think of something, please go and tell everyone what happened, and they shouldnt stray too close to Rigidstar by themselves. But make sure Rigidstar DOESNT suspect anything." Sereneheart nodded, then ran out of the Medicinecat den and pushed through the thorns, and raced up the Highrock. "All of skyclan come here!" Unaware of the summoning, they all came to the Hollowed Area. "Listen. Rigidstar. he killed Thrushleg." "He didnt!" Gasped a voice outraged. It was Rushpelt, a newer warrior. "He did. I saw it. And if were not careful; we could be next." A sudden wave of fear came from the cats, and all of them yowled and paniked. One cat, Tricklestream, pushed her kit closer to her belly. "Hes going to kill us all!" Sereneheart's sister, Friskyfur, yowled "Hes going to take my kits!" She shielded Dawnpaw and Willowpaw with her tail. "Stop!" Yowled a soft voice from the thorn tunnel. All of them turned around to see Shiningdust, her tail around her paws. Just the sight of the warm and caring shecat calmed most cats down. "Listen to Sereneheart, she didnt summon you here to cause panic." Sereneheart dipped her head to the medicine cat before continuing. "YOu must be on your guard. Rigidstar is not evil. Hes growning old. And old age can cause strange things. So dont do anything you will regret infront of him please. Act like you know nothing. Dont arrouse suspicion." She finished, before leaping down. All of the cats looked panicly at one and the other, as if scared of what the future might bring. It was five sunrises after Thrushleg's death. Nothing seemed suspicious, but as Sereneheart padded outside towards the Thorn tunnel to get to the entrance of camp, a faint sharp hiss came from the medicinecat den. "Sereneheart!" She whirled around, and saw the beautiful white and golden shecat sitting here. "I know how to kill Rigidstar." BIG ENTRY I know, Its the Prologue, or more acurately, three quarts of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.