Gormball Championship limerick

[Wembly]

So I wrote a limerick ish poem that I was thinking of submitting to the poem contest and was wondering what people think. Too much random punctuation? I was also thinking of making a drawing to go with it, not that you can submit art with the poem but the concept sounds fun to me anyway.

 

 

There once was a blueberry chia,

Whose name just happened to be Leah.

When out of the sky,

A gormball did fly,

She promptly exclaimed, “Mama mia!”

 

A crowd then came running.

Their speed was quite stunning,

But the ball they ran past.

They were approaching quite fast,

When she realized for her they were gunning.

 

As Leah stood there in fright,

Wondering how this was her plight,

The first runner reached her.

She shyly said, “Please sir.”

But he picked her up holding quite tight.

 

After two seconds had passed,

Realizing there was no large blast,

He kissed his lucky charm

Then wound up his arm,

Sending Leah flying quite fast.

 

As the game progressed on,

And no one was bust upon,

The throws became wild,

Until Leah smiled,

As an over throw let her be gone.

 

So blueberry chias please behold,

From Leah’s story you were told.

When game day comes around,

Make sure that you are not found

Or a painful day as a gormball is foretold.

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Yay! Limerick! I quite like it, nice story, words, and rhyme! Great job! Good Luck in the contest!