Story I'm writing -- need some opinions!

[persephoniekali]

I am writing a script so think movie. Right now the target audience would be teenage girls. So I want everyone's honest opinion, but especially teenage girls'! And please remember that honesty is the best -- even if you hate it, that gives me something to work from. So here is the quick and short description:

 

"An average teenage girl dreams of otherworldly things and she is spirited away to live her dreams, but when their world starts entering hers, she must choose between the worlds and close the door to the other forever."

 

Basically, do you like it? Would you go see that movie?

 

I'm still working on a title though...

[tempdisplay]

Oh, that's good. Real good. A bit Coraline-ish but still sounds awesome :O

[persephoniekali]

hopefully not so creepy! that was a strange movie :S