Poetry Contest Entry

[abetterjulie]

Okay, I already submitted it, so if you steal it that would be baaad.

I just wanted to share and get feedback because I doubt it will win. Poetry was never my strong suit and the haiku is really the only poetry I like.

 

Customization,

I am baffled by your price.

More stuff should be free!

 

If you want money,

Why do I refresh the page

To pay the ad space?

 

Oh, Lever of Doom,

The Virtupets Space Station,

Commander Garou!

 

These pay for the site,

Not the Mystery Capsule

or Butterfly Dress.

 

Some sites have a fee

and the coins buy the clothing.

Could we try and see?

 

Five dollars a month

Seems reasonable to me

And would be more green.

 

Plastic cards are bad.

They last for generations

and pollute the land.

 

I promise to click,

if you promise to help me

afford the mall stuff!

 

I know that this is a big issue for a lot of users, so I thought I would make a poetry protest! :)

[tempdisplay]

:laughingsmiley: I love it except for the parts that give TNT bad ideas:

 

Some sites have a fee

and the coins buy the clothing.

Could we try and see?

 

Oh gosh it's brilliant, Good Luck!

 

Sorry to do this but it's Kitthie last day in this Week's BC and my original topic got knocked down to page two and I can't bump ot back up. So if you would mind clockinh on my siggy to vote for my Kitthie, we would both really appreciate it. Thanks :)

[caliama]

Heheh, I think it's pretty good! ^^

 

I like it when you say "Oh, Lever of Doom..."

I don't know why, but I thought that was funny. =P

[abetterjulie]

Heheh, I think it's pretty good! ^^

 

I like it when you say "Oh, Lever of Doom..."

I don't know why, but I thought that was funny. =P

 

Thanks to both of you! Haha, yes. The dreaded Lever Of Doom. I refresh that page enough to pay for a full costume, I think!!