antiaircraft Posted August 3, 2009 Share Posted August 3, 2009 Acknowledged. Your vivid description in chapter 5 got my imagination spinning. :yes: I've already incorporated them into the outline for the next story arc - but I have to finish the current one first of course. :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaryk Posted August 3, 2009 Share Posted August 3, 2009 YES! PLEASE! That's all I want to say.. the 7 words limit is good though so no complaining here. Yeah so please do use them. Trying to think... what pets could be worthy of being my pets parents ^_^ ...hmm... Mother is a Usul and Father is a Gelert :yes:That was the one and only thing I found to be odd about your story: the species of the characters was NEVER mentioned. If your story isn't accepted into the NT, that may be the one thing you should maybe change... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linda Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 I loved the plot, but please get someone to revise your grammar ;) e.g. two minutes now until she thought, as she ....T_T. Anyways. Good luck! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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