tempdisplay Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 Hey there people :) I've completed my comic entry for the Neopian Times so if you would like to see it, just go HERE Thanks :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celticheavens Posted July 21, 2009 Share Posted July 21, 2009 Hello! Good attempt! =D Never tried for Neopian times (*has no sense of humour or anything witty to say*) but I'll try to give whatever comments I can. ^^ The idea is cute! (Happened to me goodness knows how many times last time)! I suggest doing some adjustments to the panelling from 'And We're...' and 'Bluerang1's pets + title of comic'. IMO, Bluerang1's pets can be larger and in a sperate panel (Ie: in the same speech bubble as 'And We're' but in a bigger and different coloured font etc) and the title of the comic in the middle in a large coloured font! I suggest making the action lines more obvious for the last panel in which Croy tosses(?) the Island PB. This makes it seem more obvious for when I first read it, I couldn't tell what she was doing @_@. Good luck! ^_^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tempdisplay Posted July 21, 2009 Author Share Posted July 21, 2009 Thanks for your suggestions, I'll take them t oaccount on my next comic, can't redo this one, I'm lazy LOL EDIT: Erm.. here's the link to the finished comic http://www.neopets.com/~Cheikz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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