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My first Neopets related poem


The Darkest Faerie

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Kacheeks, kind yet shy,

Celebrate their special day

In a flower patch.

 

I'm more into haikus now, and am thinking of doing one for each Neopet species. I'm planning on popping this as my signature tomorrow. What do you think of it? I'll post all my species Haikus here.

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I'm currently thinking for a Lupe one. Then I'll do requests, in order of first come, first serve. So Cybunnies after I've done the Lupe ones. I shall edit this post once I have done the Lupe one.

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Ahh... haikus. :yes: I can't write poetry for crap, but I like the Kacheek one - and writing haikus for each Neopet species is a fun idea!

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Lupes specialise in

Eating Chias and Aishas

Morning, noon and night.

 

That's my Lupe Haiku. I've also started writing in Haiku on some of the games. :P I must get round to doing a new signature as well as my Haikus. :)

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It doesn't take long to write. It just takes long to think of how to write it. When you write it, it's quite easy. Right, thinking of the Uni one now. One or two more to do after that before I do Theo's request. :P

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Really marvelous, I am going to put them on my lookup as they represent my pets.

 

PS: Ia m going to write your name below it Fluffy, did I tell you how GRRREat you are?

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:thumbsup:

 

Might I be able to request a Grarrl haiku?

Grarrls will eat all your food

But that is only because

They are hungry. Bleh :P

 

Lol, sorry, not a good one. It was a 30 second mind dump. If anyone has a better one, post it!

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It's not a Haiku, but I wrote this poem about skunk pets:

 

Skunk Painted Pet

You Are A Feast

For My Senses

Let Me Show How I Love You

Without Any Pretenses

 

Soft Like A Cybunny

And Still So Much More

I Love The Pale Trail

Down The Path Of Your Tail.

 

Your Kisses Are Sweet

(Still I’d Rather Not Taste Them)

Like The Octornapies

When My Grandmother Makes Them

 

Black, White, And Beautiful

My Eyes Are Drawn

To A White Stripe That Glows

Like The Altador Sun

 

I Hear Your Sweet Voice

Like The Ring Of A Bell

And Know Even Turmaculus

Would Fall Under Your Spell

 

Last But Not Least

The Jewel To Your Crown

The Scent You Expel

Like The Dung Of Meridell

 

Where Others Would Cringe

Like The Dung Lupe I Crave

Your Scent Is My Savior

On The Greyest Of Days.

 

Skunk Painted Pet

You Are A Feast

For My Senses

 

I Try So To Protect You

With The Best Of Defenses

So Please Stop Digging Holes

In My Neohome Fences…

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Grarrls will eat all your food

But that is only because

They are hungry. Bleh :P

 

Lol, sorry, not a good one. It was a 30 second mind dump. If anyone has a better one, post it!

 

Only one error as far as I can see... first line = 7 syllables.

 

Grarrls are residents

Of a prehistoric place

Named Tyrannia.

 

I'll get round to doing the other request soon. I'm not going to be on here as often now so it might be a while before you see it.

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