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  1. Its a joke. You now know Lyki is chinese and shes the kind of girl who can't sit still.))

     

    Lyki looked at the page that Percivia groped. "Ew theres still nail polish!" she exclaimed to the spot of glittery pink. She snapped it shut then ran to the robotics sections, searching. 'Aha.' she said softly. She pulled out a book and signed it out. she stepped outside and began reading.

     

    'Who knows where we will be in three years? maybe different things will happen. Robots will be the new humans. Humans will be the new robots. to understand more, read on!'

     

    Lyki walked while she read, not looking where she was going. Suddenly a hand grabbed her shoulder. "hey! let go!" she twisted her neck to face the person, when the face was shadowed by a long hood. "Heeyyy!" she yelled. "LET. GO!' she snapped her hand back and stepped strongly on the persons foot. "There. DONT GRAB ME AGAIN!" she shouted, backing away, when she was suddenly falling... falling... falling....

     

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    'whats going on?? why am I here? Why do I feel so strange? why am I...' Lyki was snapped out of her thoughts and opened her eyes. A long line of strange people with strange fashion stared at lyki like a ghost. "Shes awake!!" Yelled the closest one. "Awake?" Lyki thought. "WHat do you mean?" suddenly everything snapped in place. she fell into some sort of hole... startled by that person... who was... no-one? nothing made sense. So this... was the future....

  2. Scary sister rides a speedy Chopper while reading something online which is like that random horrible scary cheesecake monster that has one-hundred different flavours of petpets for my ghost chias to fart around happily with squeals like the fat pig named Oinky Poinky which have no more colorful legs that dance like ladybugs eating purple toenails belonging to monsters and aliens ziggy piggy friends with purple ponies poking anything in blue overalls with sapphire cheese that plans to eat intelligent petpets but zoos never allow unicorns eat monkeys and they aren't poofy psychotic things destroying air faerie and fire faeries staffs nu-uh but queen Fyora had a big cookie that was used wrecklessly for demolishing archaic artifacts arrogantly because the evil mahogany patio fancies destroying eatable plants which strangle tiny horrible grilled calamari skin that swim undetected most times throughout the Maraquan whirlpool devouring old fat fish with stinky expired license so that Fyora could dance happily with mental Kau goths Jack Sparrow hired me unhappily to swab his filthy Captain's quarters while wearing a hideous frock of dung and pearls served with stuff from the horrible monster known as the Blob-of-sushi served with escargots platters and smelly tofu from Shenkuu which really smells extremely muffin-like under water but above with rotten diaper smell they shall explode in 3-2-1 and lift-off in T- minus ten, which has been cancelled due to smell air waste in the sea-like ocean where sea octopuses play tag while enjoying popsicles that purpley-orange and taste like VOMIT from a Moehog That ate cookies while dancing and playing with Tipem the pink meepit, which isn't dancing the Marcarena with fifty lobsters babies so that caused destruction in a giant toilet filled with pudding and chewy toothpaste that tasted like dead skunk unfortunately so delicious maniacs always puke mesos junk on me for taking away popcorn from Ian because he ignored the crazy chimpanzee that always meows at the bored moon for 10 days on the back of a humped camel that goes somewhere and eats blue mustard with rocksalt banana pies filled with coconut cream doughnuts colored rainbow raindrops to Neopia Space catnip that taste of chicken quiches and twelve huge honey coated walnuts spawned three-thousand flaming arrows that always peirced raw KFC Snackers and tacos resulting in tons of delicious metroids snacks with cheesey puns like

  3. Heyy! Sorry I havnt been updating for a while. But the next part is now.))

     

    Lyki pinched her nose. "eww, I can't believe I'm doing this..." she plopped the foul bag on the ground and took cover. "I feel bad for the poor dude who has to take this..." She ran back inside.

     

    "MAMMM!" She yelled at the top of her lungs. "IM GOING TO THE LIBRARY!!!"

     

    "Okay.. Okay.." her mother shouted.

     

    "BYYYEEE!' Lyki screamed as she jammed on her running shoes to leave. before she went she grabbed her school bag and left.

     

    5 minutes of walking took Lyki to her destination. She pulled out her diary and started to write...

     

    Finally at the library.. looking for books on robotics, ya know, so the future wont be AS crazy as it may be.. if I can I would

     

    "AHA!" yelled a voice triumphantly.

     

    "HEYY!" Lyki shouted. Many 'shss' were hissed by nearby readers.

     

    "I got the diary Lyyy always writes in... yay!"

     

    "Give it back Percivia!!" Lyki protested.

     

    "I see you are one of those 'nerds' who are looking out for the... lets see.. 'unpredictable future.'" she read loudly, causing her giggling friends to crack up.

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    "I hate you." Lyki said angrily.

     

    "Havnt heard THAT one before." Percivia said truthfully.

     

    "Good, now you have." Lyki muttered. "Now give. it. back!"

     

    "Oh fine you whiney Pants. Your no fun!" Percivia taunted as she stuck the book in the air, then dropped it like an infested vest.

     

    "Thanks alot Percivia." She breathed.

     

    TO BE CONTINUED.

     

    **now you know Lyki hated Percivia and she was constantly being picked on.**

  4. Setting: A creepy castle surrounded by a black moat and an evil looking forest.

     

    Plot: um. none. really.

     

    Charries: must be gothy//inocent (but then turned into the dark side) charries. Up to three charies. if wanted may be a teacher or an animal. each charrie can have 3 powers.

     

    Powers available: Animal transformation; Purple fire; Ice; evil earth magic; power of blackouts; blue electricity; levitation; flight. Any other ideas must be consulted with me first by messages.

     

    Other: the students who attended the school before MUST have one form of grudge on another student for whatever reason.

     

    Teachers may NOT be used as mains.

     

    Animals are there for side//supporting roles.

     

    Please make a LIST scrippy. thanks.

     

     

     

    Rysha (Riy-sha)

    (there for 1 year, HATES Linovi)

    Dark long red hair.

    Ice blue/purple eyes.

    has purple wings.

    wears rough Purple garments.

    Powers: Levitation, Flight, Animal Transformation (A blood red fox with purple eyes)

     

    Darnaji(Darn-ai-G)

    (Dog, companion of Rysha)

    A brown/black dog with redish eyes.

    Powers: can create massive vines when angry. Otherwise just an evil-ish pup.

     

    Linovi (Lyn-O-V)

    (New, HATES Rysha)

    Dirty blonde hair (long)

    Green/red eyes.

    wears Navyblue and Dark red with a green amulet.

    Powers: Can create purple flames, Blue ice, small vines to bind.

     

    Linovi trekked carefully along the evil looking trees. After passing the Great Meadows of Nyola, everything seemed spookier, eerier, and eviller. She took out her school map, that held her acceptance letter in the Academy of Dark Mages. she was pretty close to the moat. And as she walked, she felt as if something was watching her. She whirled around, and saw nothing. Just a pile of leaves. She didnt know that Darnaji, Rysha's dog, was watching Linovi carefully. Darnaji slipped out of his hiding place, and ran to where a Blood red fox was waiting, with dark purple eyes. Suddenly the fox shifted, and after a blind of black, was a teen with red hair, ice blueish purply eyes, and purple wings errupted from her back. "Just what I thought." Rysha said, her voice sounded very quiet yet the menace was quite noticable. "A new girl. who doesnt know her powers. Thats just what ADM needs." She sighed, and then jumped. Her wings flapped twice and supported the witch as she flew back to the castle, Darnaji being levitated by Rysha's glowing eyes. She landed and folded in her wings, then leaned casually against the wall.

  5. Serenestar stepped between Crystalstar and Clearclouds. "Im sorry Crystalstar. But that is my question. Well?" She mewed questioningly. Friskyfur padded out of the nursery and nuzzled Dawnkit. "Serenestar, the pa- oh. Hi." she dipped her head to both leaders. "Serenestar. The patrol returned." "And...?" Serenestar continued. "They caught some prey. Enough for all of us to have a small meal." "thank you Friskyfur." she nodded slightly to her sister, then flicked her tail once. Friskyfur nodded then backed away, Dawnkit mewling in confusion.

     

    Oh whoooops i didnt notice. Okay x out the part where i was asking Clearclouds. change that with why is the patrol here. Sorry

  6. I have one! Its one that I learned a long time ago...

     

    its dirty though!

     

    three explorers found an un-charted island and decided to explore. During thier exploration, they found a tribe living there. The chief said: "If you want to live. Bring back 10 of the same fruits."

     

    The first guy brought back 10 oranges. "Shove them up your butt and I will spare you. If you do not, I will execute you." So the guy starts shoving the oranges in. 1....2... and then.. "UGH... I cant do it!!" he yells. The chief executes him.

     

    The second guy brought back 10 berries. "Shove them up your butt." The chief comanded. So he began shoving them in... 1...2..3.4.5.6.789.. then he looks over the Chief's shoulders and starts laughing hystericly. The Chief thinks hes laughing at him so he killed him.

     

    IN HEAVEN

    Guy 1: Why did you stop? you were sooooooo close! you could have been rich!

    Guy 2: I couldnt help it! i saw the third guy comming back with PINAPPLES!!

     

    NEXT one:

     

    Its a blonde joke... sry to the blondes! I mean no offence to any of you.

     

    A very poor blonde was looking for work. So she walks in the streets and sees a well funished house that had a sign that said 'Help wanted'. So she walkes into the Porch and knocks on the door. A man answers.

     

    Man: hello? can I help you?

    Blonde: yes.. I saw that you needed help? can I help with anything?

    Man: yes of course! can you paint my porch? theres some paint at the back.

    Blonde: oh sure! how much?

    Man: hows a big 40$?

    Blonde: that sounds great thannks!

     

    After the blonde leaves, the man talks to his wife.

     

    Wife: does that lady know what shes doing?

    Man: of course. She was standing on the Porch anyways.

     

    Later on, the blonde comes back inside the house.

     

    Blonde: hello? Im done painting your porch!

    Man: excellent!

    Blonde: by the way, there was extra paint so I did two coatings.

    Man: thanks. heres 40$.

    Blonde oh thats very nice!

     

    The Blonde accepts the money before heading out the front door. at the door she turns around and says "by the way, thats not a Porche silly, thats a Ferarri!"

  7. I wonder what the future will be like. It would be cool if I could go in the future... you know... to see how it would be like.... for example the school nerd Bobby may be a multi millionare.... and Percivia the School Hottie will be living in the streets... I

     

    Lyki paused while she wrote in her Diary. She was a modern day girl, only 11, with long black hair and warm brown eyes. She lived in 2007, and goes to school at Westhigh Middleschool. Being in grade six, she thought it would be good to write down thoughts andkeep them for later use. She paused again, before writing:

     

    Wonder what ILL be doing. Probably looking for a hubbi ♥. Id better go. Times flying.

     

    Lyki stopped writing again when she made the period at the end of the phrase. It was only 5:00 Pm, so the truth was she was just out of ideas. She collasped in her bed, her head at the edge as she stared out the window. A bluebird was singing on an autumn tree. Lyki sighed. She checked the calendar posted on her bedroom-wall. "September 13th. Great." she mumbled. She ran down stairs and grabbed a bag.

    "Hey Missy where are you going??" Yelled her mother from the kitchen.

    "Out." Lyki yelled back. "To the library. Theres nothing cool to do here."

    "Whadya mean nothing?" Said Chimera, her older sister who was playing with Tofu. Tofu was the family dog. He was a white puppy with black spots, and cute black eyes.

    "Well, nothing exciting." Lyki replied.

    "Well you can always play with Tofu." Chimera said.

    "And your playing with him." Lyki said.

    'Uhuh. so that means you cant play with him." Chimera pretended to cross off an X on an invisible list. "How bout watch TV?"

    "And watch Chinese people farm and grow crops all day? Id rather take out the garbage!" Lyki rebuked, and even as she said that she felt disgusted. the garbage was disgusting.

    "Good." said her mother as if she read Lyki's thoughts. "Then thats what you'll do. Or else stay here and watch 'Chinese people farm and grow crops all day'. Besides, you are chinese. It wouldnt hurt if you learned our culture."

    "Im taking the garbage out BYE" Lyki said quickly, grabing the smelly black bag and ran out the door.

    "Good going mom." Chimera said.

    "Whenever it has to do with learning her culture, she will do anything i say instead." Commented her mother while she was cooking. "Lets hope I can do the same thing to her, this time instead of watching she has to eat my steamed borcoli."

    Chimera almost puked, and Tofu smiled, showing lots of Brocoli bits on his teeth.

     

    **Author's note** teeeehheeee! thats the first part! Do you like it? do you get the last part? Tofu ate Chimera's brocoli for her. Heehee

  8. Serenestar twitched her golden ears and pushed herself to her paws. She padded out of her den to meet Bluesnow. Her eyes narrowed. "Yes Bluesnow? what can I do for you?"

     

    Lushleaf licked her lips then got up. "Greyspot(s)! what are you doing here?" she looked around nervously. "There are cats all around. we will be caught in the enclosed space were in!" she hissed.

  9. Scary sister rides a speedy Chopper while reading something online which is like that random horrible scary cheesecake monster that has one-hundred different flavours of petpets for my ghost chias to fart around happily with squeals like the fat pig named Oinky Poinky which have no more colorful legs that dance like ladybugs eating purple toenails belonging to monsters and aliens ziggy piggy friends with purple ponies poking anything in blue overalls with sapphire cheese that plans to eat intelligent petpets but zoos never allow unicorns eat monkeys and they aren't poofy psychotic things destroying air faerie and fire faeries staffs nu-uh but queen Fyora had a big cookie that was used wrecklessly for demolishing archaic artifacts arrogantly because the evil mahogany patio fancies destroying eatable plants which strangle tiny horrible grilled calamari skin that swim undetected most times throughout the Maraquan whirlpool devouring old fat fish with stinky expired license so that Fyora could dance happily with mental Kau goths Jack Sparrow hired me unhappily to swab his filthy Captain's quarters while wearing a hideous frock of dung and pearls served with stuff from the horrible monster known as the Blob-of-sushi served with escargots platters and smelly tofu from Shenkuu which really smells extremely muffin-like under water but above with rotten diaper smell they shall explode in 3-2-1 and lift-off in T- minus ten, which has been cancelled due to smell air waste in the sea-like ocean where sea octopuses play tag while enjoying popsicles that purpley-orange and taste like VOMIT from a Moehog That ate cookies while dancing and playing with Tipem the pink meepit, which isn't dancing the Marcarena with fifty lobsters babies so that caused destruction in a giant toilet filled with pudding and chewy toothpaste that tasted like dead skunk unfortunately so delicious maniacs always puke mesos junk on me for taking away popcorn from Ian because he ignored the crazy chimpanzee that always meows at the bored moon for 10 days on the back of a humped camel that goes somewhere and eats blue mustard with rocksalt banana pies

  10. **For the rest of this chapter, ill be switching view to view like in the first chapter, it may be confusing, so reread if nessasary. (Gawd my spelling sucks today)**

     

    Quinn led the two girls to what looked like a deserted field that was nothing but smooth ground with lots of fire glowing around them. "Now, Minte assigned me these weapons for you." Quinn said as she picked out a large mace with flaming tips and a large sword with long green vines flowing out of the handle. Serene gasped as Quinn royaly handed the sword to her and Rajin grunted as the mace was handed to her. "Now, lets begin your training." Quinn said, with a beggining of a smile.

     

    Ocarina led the other two girls down into a brightly lit corridor with a large target at the end of the hall. "Do you have an idea of what your doing today?" Aslaya narrowed her eyes. "Im guessing we have to hit the targets?" "Yes good job." Ocarina praised her. "But its soooo far away!" Aleiati complained. "No... not really." Ocarina said. "Watch." She pulled out a silver arrow and stretched it into her blue and gold bow. She aimed, and fired with a sudden fieriosity that shocked the two girls. as the arrow streamed as fast a bullet, Aleiati could see a faint white glow surrounding the silver arrow. Suddenly a large pang surprised everyone. "What was that?" Aslaya said, shocked. "look." Ocarina said, pointing idly at the target. both girls looked, and the arrow was in dead center, and was streaming like fire was coming out the other end. "Wow! I want to learn how to do that!" Aslaya said rather excitedly. "Soon. but first, your weapons." Ocarina handed a smaller yet thick bow to her sister, along with small wooden arrows. "Why do I get mini ones?" Aleiati asked, dissapointed. "Your water magic will rust any silver." Ocarina replied. "I wont use an-" "Sh." Ocarina silenced her. "you never know." She handed a small pouch to Aslaya. "Here, inside are small daggers. "

     

    ** OUCH FINGER CRAMP-ISH** I will finish this chapter later (maybe today or tommorrow). Well, biiiiiez

  11. I want you all to know that if youve seeen this somewhere before, its most likely you saw it at

     

    http://www.neopets.com/~coral_rivers10023334

     

    From the Rp version of this magigi. The story will start off with the pre-written prologue (BY MOI) and i shall continue from there.

     

    **PLEASE NOTE** This is basicly as simular as Erin Hunter's writing style as possible. so there will be DEATHS, FIGHTS, AND VIOLENCE. Make sure any readers under the age of 8 doesnt read this, I dun wanna give a bad impression ^.~

     

     

    CHAPTER 1/PROLOGUE

    THE NEW BEGINNING

    Serenestar sat down in the shadows of her den. Her green eyes sparkled with loss and memory as her mind reeled back when it all happened...

     

    it all started when Serenestar, then Sereneheart, had a dream. it was strange, she recalled the voices of Starclan tingling in her mind. A new path will begin with sacrifices and losses, but out of the pool of blood will show a new leader, a new way, a new clan. Sereneheart shivered visibly as the onimous words had a hint of a threat in them. She woke up later, feeling light-headed and dizzy. She stumbled out of her den, and began to munch on a rather crunchy mouse, when she saw Dreamwing, returning in the state of shock. Sereneheart always knew Dreamwing had a dream, to become a great leader. Rigidstar padded out of his den by the hollowed area and licked Dreamwing soothingly. "Whats wrong?" ".. its Thrushleg! His leg was crippled! And hes terribly hurt!" Suddenly Rigidstar's eyes grew wild and he sat up indignately. "WHY DID YOU DO THAT!" he yowled. Dreamwing jumped, her eyes were growing wider, and Sereneheart scented the purgent smell of fear comming off her in waves. "Rigidstar! I didnt do it! Sereneheart sent me on Dawn Patrol with him and Lushleaf!" Rigidstar's eyes narrowed further. Sereneheart flinched. She remembered how she ordered that exact patrol earlier at the clearing; but Rigidstar didnt seem to hear the first part of Dreamwing's explanation. "So you take out Lushleaf; then cripple Thrushleg's leg?!" he yowled. Then he seemed very old. "Dreamwing. Im very angry with you." His eyes narrowed until they were beady black slits. He lepted up the Highrock and yowled the summons. At once all the warriors came from behind the nursery and pushed through the thorn tunnel to get to the other half of the camp. "I have before us a traitor. Dreamwing. I called you all here to tell you... she is... BANISHED!" his last word was a yowl, and caused a confused Caterwaul from all the cats surrounding. Dreamwing stiffened, then her eyes sparkled with so much anger, all the cats winced as if she went on fire. "How dare you!" she screeched angrily. "I did not do anything. Yet you punish me for bringing back grave news?? In fact; I dont care. I am now called Lostdream, and it was YOU, Rigidstar, who drove me to this state!!" Her claws unsheathed, and most cats thought she was going to attack her former leader, before her eyes closed and were clouded with confusion, rage, and weariness, then, after brief hesistation, ran out of camp, yowling as if all the cats from starclan had just clawed her. Sereneheart watched her go sadly, and many other cats bowed thier head as if they had lost a comrad, and in a way they did, because Lostdream will never be with them anymore. She spotted a pair of golden eyes that reflected Serenehearts grief and some furiness from Lostdream. Sereneheart could understand why her eyes looked like that; it was Shiningdust, thier medicine cat. Their eyes met for a moment, before Shiningdust padded back into her den. Sereneheart narrowed her eyes. This was just the begining.

     

    the next day Sereneheart realized she hasnt seen Thrushleg anywhere, though Lushleaf was back in the den. She got up and shook her pelt vigurously. Maybe he went out hunting earlier. She scraped her claws against the ground. She needed Thrushleg for a patrol. She poked her head into Rigidstar's den to see if he was in there, but his den was empty, and by the smell of it; it seemed as if he went out early too. Sereneheart narrowed her eyes as she padded out the entrance.Instantly, she picked up a scent of Rigidstar, and it turned to confusion as it almost overpowered Thrushleg's scent, as if she wasnt the only one looking for him. She sniffed again. She remebered she sent the patrol towards the Silver River, so she began to head towards the waterfilled river. She sniffed again, and it turned to confusion as she detected Thrushleg's scent again, yet it seemed a wee bit fainter. She tried to pinpoint the smell, but she was confused yet again but the recent scent of Rigidstar, as if he was trying to overlay his scent ontop of Thrushleg's. She began to follow the scent again, and this time the path veered sharply towards Mothermouth. Then thats where she found it. Tracks. very strange; unnatural tracks. And blood. lots of it. This seems to be the spot where Thrushleg injured his leg. She padded forward determindly, when she ended going to the sand pit, when she was just intime to see Thrushleg leaning heavily against a tree, while- Sereneheart gasped- Rigidstar, was trying to bite his neck. "Why? why? wh-" Thrushleg gasped, as if trying to reason with his leader. But he never did; as his third try was cut short. Sereneheart took a step back. "n-no..." she mewed quietly, as Rigidstar spat out Thrushleg's brown fur beside the unmoving shape. Sereneheart raced out of the trees and confronted her leader. "Why did you do such a thing Rigidstar?" she yowled angrily. "Because he is now useless. We all know any cat with a crippled leg cant do anything." He hissed, his eyes narrowing. "Now..." but he never finished. Sereneheart guessed what was going to happen next. He was going to kill her. She was very scared, it was only two sunrises ago when Rigidstar hadnt gone insane. She raced back to camp, then bolted into the Medicine cat den, where Shiningdust looked at her very strangely. "You seem rather scared." she commented, her golden eyes gentle. "Yes, yes! Rigidstar.. he killed... Thrushleg!" She panted. "What???" Shiningdust exclaimed. "Yes. yes. its true. its a matter of time before he kills all of us. He already tried to kill me already!" "he did?" Shiningdust mewed louder. "Yes!" "Dear starclan! We must do something fast, before this gets out of hand!" She closed her eyes. "While I think of something, please go and tell everyone what happened, and they shouldnt stray too close to Rigidstar by themselves. But make sure Rigidstar DOESNT suspect anything." Sereneheart nodded, then ran out of the Medicinecat den and pushed through the thorns, and raced up the Highrock. "All of skyclan come here!" Unaware of the summoning, they all came to the Hollowed Area. "Listen. Rigidstar. he killed Thrushleg." "He didnt!" Gasped a voice outraged. It was Rushpelt, a newer warrior. "He did. I saw it. And if were not careful; we could be next." A sudden wave of fear came from the cats, and all of them yowled and paniked. One cat, Tricklestream, pushed her kit closer to her belly. "Hes going to kill us all!" Sereneheart's sister, Friskyfur, yowled "Hes going to take my kits!" She shielded Dawnpaw and Willowpaw with her tail. "Stop!" Yowled a soft voice from the thorn tunnel. All of them turned around to see Shiningdust, her tail around her paws. Just the sight of the warm and caring shecat calmed most cats down. "Listen to Sereneheart, she didnt summon you here to cause panic." Sereneheart dipped her head to the medicine cat before continuing. "YOu must be on your guard. Rigidstar is not evil. Hes growning old. And old age can cause strange things. So dont do anything you will regret infront of him please. Act like you know nothing. Dont arrouse suspicion." She finished, before leaping down. All of the cats looked panicly at one and the other, as if scared of what the future might bring.

     

    It was five sunrises after Thrushleg's death. Nothing seemed suspicious, but as Sereneheart padded outside towards the Thorn tunnel to get to the entrance of camp, a faint sharp hiss came from the medicinecat den. "Sereneheart!" She whirled around, and saw the beautiful white and golden shecat sitting here. "I know how to kill Rigidstar."

     

     

     

    BIG ENTRY I know, Its the Prologue, or more acurately, three quarts of it.

  12. Heeyyy THanks for welcoming me!

     

    Ive already made myself at home (Err.. internet-wise ^.~)

     

    to all those people, Since you know I LUVVVV warriors, you probably guessed this already, but if you havnt, then heres the catch:

     

    I made a new RP on the Roleplaying part thingamabob. It says **Warriors** so if your as obsessed with Warriors as I am, JOIN IN WIT ME!

     

    Oh and Im starting a new book//writing thing in the Stories and Literature, the Elemental four. Check it out and Rate it pweeaze. THats all I guess... for now! (buh buh BUH!)

  13. **Note to readers** Posts will be lengthly as I make it up along the way. BTW, Short posts is for the days im out of it. Literally. Ill try to get one more post once every 4/5 days, so hold on tight peepz!

    PS: If you would like to comment//suggest//rate, feel free to! Just post. Ill read the comment/suggestion//rating gratefully and will try to improve my writing skills. I know Chapter 2 has no indents/paras, please bare with me!

     

    CHAPTER 3

    Minte narrowed her ice-blue eyes. "I will now assign you to your mentors."

    "Mentors?" Rajin snorted. "Ive bee-"

    "SSHHHHH!" Wyvernai hissed loudly, her black-pitted eyes narrowed. Her finger was pointed threateningly at Rajin. "one more comment and Ill stick this magic up your b-"

    "AS I WAS SAYING...." Minte shouted, overlapping Wyvernais snarl, "Aslaya and Aleiati, I want you to go with Ocarina. Serene and Rajin, go with Quinn. They will teach you how to use combat weapons, but for Serene and Rajin, I want you to learn how to fight with proper gear, while Aslaya and Aleiati, you will be needed for long-range items and all of you will be tutored by me and Wyvernai to learn how to use your magic."

    Serene nodded quietly then got up and stood beside Quinn, while Rajin grumbled loud enough for everyone to hear. As the four girls were split up, Aslaya suddenly said: "Why are we needed? arnt you all strong enough to fight for our Kingdom like it has been for over 20 years?"

    Quinn narrowed her eyes. "Thats a complecated question Awhatisit?"

    "Aslaya." She replied. "but why? Surely if we know why we are fighting we can focus better?"

    "She has a point." Rajin agreed grudgingly.

    Minte silenced Quinn with a look as Quinn began to talk again. "This matter is not to be discussed lightly. When the time is right, ill explain it all then. But now is not the time. For now, go with your mentors, and train hard. Sooner or Later you will know your destiny."

     

    ((To be Continuedddd))

  14. Before you all think 'how did I type all this at once?' lettme inform you this is copied and pasted here, from a petpage. THX and Enjoy! (Its planning to be long and MAY haff some violence in it, but hopefully not to bad.)

     

    Four ordinary girls live in different places and area of a big kingdom.

    The never met, and they never knew what was destined to be.

    But when they each find a sacred stone of Earth, Wind, Fire and Water that gave them elemental powers,

    they are suddenly in the middle of a waging war, and problems within the kingdom of Faar.

    Though they have thier powers, the Magic goddess, Minte,doesnt approve of them.

    Meanwhile Quinn, the battle queen, Ocarina, the Archess, and Wyvernai the Dragon rider, are all ready for a battle...

     

    The story Unfolds..

     

     

    Prologue

     

    A beautiful young girl around her late teens sat down in a large thrown in an impressive castle. Three other large pink seated

    thrones were filled by three other woman. The youngest one, spoke first.

    It is time." Her white satin dress went diagonnally from her thighs down to her legs.

    The war?" questioned the one on the center right, who had long red hair tied into a narrow ponytail that went on her

    suit of mahogony armour. "No Quinn." Said the girl with the black hair. "No. When our four friends will come together." The one sitting at the very left, nodded slowly.

    her bleach blond wavy hair and sparkly ice blue eyes glowed. her hair fell to her hips, and the

    end was pointed which was curled itself tightly around her arm. One hand fiddled with a bracelet that had an arrow.

    Yes.." Her voice was soft. "But what if we fail?

    Then we fight anyways." Said the lady at the very right said firmly, who had short violet hair. her eyes glowered. "My dragons await thier orders." She snapped.

    Very well Wyvernai, but your dragons will have to wait." Said the girl.

    really?" Said the lady with blond hair. "why Minte?"

    because." Minte replied, her snow blue eyes glowed.

    We have to wait for our four Elementals Ocarina. Until then, we will wait.

     

    Chapter one

     

    South west in the Faar kingdom, in the town of Larid,

    Was a young girl who was pacing around an oak.

    She had maple hair, light green eyes, and slightly tanned skin.

    her hands fiddled with her green school bag, comepletely unaware that she was being watched.

    She sat down at a park bench, and pushed her hair behind her ears.

    She heard a voice behind her. "Serene, dear, you forgot your lunch. again."

    She turned around and saw her Widowed mother. "Oh, sorry." She mumbled, taking the rolled up paper bag from her mother's trembling fingers.

    Take care." Her mom whispered. "You dont think I wont?" Serene protested as she stuffed her lunch in her bag and walked off.

     

    On the other side, south east of Faar, in the desertish plains of Munchak, was another female,

    who had a slightly more lean frame than Serene. She was a fiery redhead with light brown eyes. Her skin was quite tanned and looked like a very light chestnut.

    Her body was scored with lots of scratches and bruises, as if she were wrestling scorpions everyday. Her clothes were from rough leather,

    and it was slightly torn. Her hair was very straight, and she placed a hand over her eyes and looked around, searching as usual.

    Her eyes fell straight onto a strange pyramid of which she hasnt seen before. She ran into her hut to find a flashlight.

    where are you going Rajin?" asked a small red head. "not now sis." Rajin replied swiftly. she ran out and walked to the pyramid. her curisoty got the best of her- she stepped tentivly inside...

     

    Meanwhile, North East of Faar, was a small village called Minority with peasants shouting out thier bargain prices to those from Munchak and Larid.

    Inside one of the clay and mud buildings, sat a beautiful maiden with bleach blond hair that fell to her chest level and was dappled and was in a zigzag formation.

    her clothes were a fine silk, a beautiful woven blue. Her eyes sparkled the colour of the sky, and her hand passed the small blue gem pattern on her forhead.

    Being the princess of Vakai paid off. She got up and looked through the open window and saw a Peasant shouting- 'Get rare Gemstones here! Best ever!" The maiden brightened and shouted.

    RAYOU!" A tall man bustled into her room. "Yes Princess Alieati?" Rayou asked. "Kindly tell me what type of Gems that Peasant is selling.

    She said. "yes Princess Alieati." He mumbled and sped outside. Alieati checked her nails patiently as the servant returned. "Princess, hes selling aqua marines and opals." He said.

    Alieati nodded. She tossed him some coins. 'Perchase me one, keep the change." Rayou nodded then went outside again. exactly five seconds later, Alieati was holding an aquamarine. "Thanks." she said, tying a golden thread through the gem and tying it around her neck. "Pretty isnt it?" She smiled and squeezed her new gem. it glowed in her fingers. "huh?"

     

    Northwest of Faar, in the small cramped town of Shuani, was a single teen who was walking in the town, looking around with her smoky grey eyes.She had a plate of black hair with tinges of blue that were in long bushy pigtails. Her name was Aslaya, and she was quite shy. She had a tiny bracelet with beads and a single white pearl. the bracelet seemed to make her feel safe. Aslaya ate a small kebab, a Shuani specialty, as she walked unintrestedly around her town. She froze as she saw a small lady with violet hair leaning casually against a wall. She had small black dragon wings on each shoulderblade. Aslaya was speechless, but being quiet, it wasnt a rare thing. The figure spoke. "I am Wyvernai." she said, her black eyes studied Aslaya. 'yes." she said to herself. "Come." Aslaya took a tentive step towards Wyvernai. "Good." She siad appreciativly. "I advise you hold on." Aslaya's eyes widened and clutched on the lady's hand, as she closed her eyes and they both dissapeared with a 'pop'.

     

    There was nothing in there. Rajin tilted her head to the side. "What..." she shined her flashlight around; and brushed off the sand that was stuck on the temple walls. "Just a musty old chamber." She groaned. "And I thought-" she broke off; she saw something glitter. she fell onto her knees, and shined her light on the ground. she found it again, and clasped her fingers around the red glittering thing. She lifted it from the sand, and it burned. "Ouch!" she exclaimed, and dropped it. Her hand was charred. "Strange..." She wrapped her hand in a thick bandage, then lifted it again, and quickly ran back to her hut. She dropped it down on the small knobby wooden table, and took an oil lamp. It was a ruby. "Rubies dont burn..." Rajin said slowly. she took off the bandage, and, the burn wasnt there anymore. "what the..." she went outside, and to her surprise she saw a woman with heavy armour and a long tight pony tail. She looked around her and the pyramid was gone. "It wont come back." Said the lady. Rajin turned to the lady quickly. "What do you me-" "It wont come back." She repeated. "The temple?" "What other temple do you know of?" The lady snapped. "My name is Quinn. I was sent to fetch you." "Fetch m-" "Yes! Fetch you!" She growled. "Come here." Rajin stepped beside Quinn. And they both dissapeared.

     

    Serene went to school as usual. She sat down and saw something in her desk. It said-

    Meet me after school. I have a surprise for you!

    - your ♥er."

    Serene gasped. "EW!" Her best friend, Jaylin, grabbed the paper. "Hey Serenipoo! YOu have an admirer!" She yelled. "Jaylin, shaddup." Serene snarled. She stuffed the note in her bag.

    Once school was over, she walked towards the entrance hall, ignoring Jaylin's love coos. She met a young woman around her late teens. "Serene." She said. "EW! Your my admirer?" Serene yelped. The girl winced. "Ugh. Remind me to kick Ocarina. She was the one who said that is was a good idea to write that so it wouldnt atract any attention." "Hardly!" Serene snorted. "Half the school will be here any minute." The lady sighed. "Did you eat lunch?" "No. ew." Serene replied. "my mom always packs the grossest foods." "Oh." The lady replied, her eyes twinkling. "Ocarina was right again. Lets go outside." She strode outside, and held the door open for Serene. Serene went outside. "What is it?" "Open the bag." She said promptly. Serene opened it, and saw a dazzling emerald. "What?" Serene said. "how did that get there?" "Ocarina." The lady replied. "Anyways; squeeze it." "WHAT?" "Squeeze the emerald." she replied annoyed. Serene put her hand in and withdrew the gem. "Who are you?" "Minte." The lady replied. "But it doesnt matter." Serene squeezed the emerald, and it felt as if a strange force entered in a wave into her body. "Good." Minte said, satsified. "Now hang on." Serene grabbed Minte's staff, as the owner closed her eyes, and both dissapeared in a flash of light, and a single snowflake fell from the ground.

     

    Aleiati opened her fingers, and the aquamarine was glowing. She suddenly felt chilled, then plesantly cool. She walked swiftly in a circle, and her blonde hair tailed her- waving in the air. "Are you done yet?" Said a voice by the doorway. Aleiati turned around. "No need to worry." said the woman calmly. "YOu look like me!" Aleiati exclaimed. The lady opened her eyes, that shone a sea blue. "Yes Aleiati. We do." The lady replied. "Im your older sister." "What!" Aleiati exclaimed. "But, Im an only child!" "I left Minority when you were young to live in the kingdom of Faar." She replied. "Im Ocarina." "Ocarina, why have you come?" "Because." Ocarina replied. "You have water magic pulsing through you." "Is that what I felt?" Aleiati questioned. "Yes." Ocarina replied. "Lets go, fast." She beckoned her sister forward, held on tightly to her hand, then dissapeared with her.

     

     

    **Author's note: Mehe, like the first chapter? please send me some suggestions for the next chapter! **

     

    CHAPTER 2

     

    Aleiati appeared into a castle room. "Where am I?" She looked around and saw three other indiviuals in the room, who seemed as puzzled as she was. "Who are you guys?" The girl with the maple hair looked up. "My name is Serene." She replied. "Rajin." The redhead growled. "You?" "Aleiati." "Al-ee-at-ee? wow that a long name!" Serene joked. Aleiait glared at her. Serene narrowed her eyes. "How did you get here?" Aleiati sighed. "i dunno. My supposed sister brought me here." "Sister?" Serene's eyes widened with curiosity. "Yea." Rajin brushed her rough clothes. "are we going to sit here all day?" Serene Whirled around. "Shaddup." She muttered. "Shes been on our trail ever since weve gotten here." She whispered to Aleiati, who put her hand on her lips to hide her giggle. "Is there anyone else here?" She asked; back to business. "I dont know." Serene replied. "This place is to big to search for the forth element." Aleiati nodded breifly, until she saw someone. It was Aslaya, who froze as she squeezed her Pearl firmly. "Oh hey." Aleiati said. "Are you the fourth element?" Aslaya looked up blankly. "Are you?" Aleiati repeated firmly. Aslaya drew back, her eyes dancing wildly. A sudden force slammed into Aleiati and she flew back. "Ah!" She said loudly. Aslaya narrowed her eyes. "Who are you?" she asked softly. "Your not in a library." Aleiati snapped, smoothering a wrinkle in her dress. "Aleiati. Princess of Vakai." She added as an after thought. "Serene." Said the Maple haired girl. "I guess a normal school girl." "Rajin." Growled the redhead. "and you?" Aslaya didnt say anything, but her eyes sparkled with tension. "As-aslaya." She said. "Had enough chatter yet?" the four girls jumped. Well, more specifically, three girls jumped. Rajin glared around. "Good." Said the voice satsified. She stepped out of the shadows, and she had black hair that fell down to her chest, with ice blue eyes, wearing a white dress and holding a staff. "Now it is time." "Finnally!" Another voice exclaimed, and her voice seemed to have a hiss to it. She stepped out; or more detailedly, she floated out of the shadows. She had medium violet hair, and eyes as black as pits. She narrowed her eyes, her purple dragon wings flapping as she floated. "Its about time they stopped thier dittle datter. Time for busniess." "Busniess? before you begin offering us cases, we choose no deal!" Aleiati chuckled at her own joke, but the others shot her a bewildered and slightly angry glance that made her stop imediatly. "Well deal or no deal, and cases-" "we get it." Said yet another lady, this time with amber armour and blood red hair that was in a tight pony-tail. She was holding a large spear, and her brown eyes glared at the others, challenging each one as she gazed from Aleiati to Rajin. "So this is our 'Chosen ones'? Pretty pathetic bunch." she scoffed. "Hey!" Rajin growled. "Ladies stop!" said a more bracing voice. "Ah,Ocarina, you join us at last." said the dragon lady. "Yes, I know." Ocarina said lightly. She had curly long blonde hair, with a magnificent blue dress that seemed to belong to a queen. She was holding a beautiful blue bow with silver arrows. "Well, now that were all here, lets begin." The girl with staff said, who seemed to be the leader. "I am Minte; the magic goddess." "goddess? pft. She is our age!" Rajin scoffed. A sudden jet of pure magic flew above her head, perfectly skimming her head. "Looks can be deceiving." Minte said firmly, pulling her staff back to her side. "As I was saying; I am the Magic Goddess. I lead a band of mages and Magesses, trained in a special technique I happen to teach myself, an excerise to highten their magic." She pointed to the Dragon Lady. "This is Wyvernai. She is the commander of all the Dragons in the kingdom. Be careful, she has a nasty temper. She only agreed to go on our side because we promised her a lordess spot. She has nasty dark magic that will put you in your place." "Thanks for the warning." Muttered Aleiati. Wyvernai shot a furious look at Aleiati, and she felt her skin burn away. Minte pointed to the Armoured lady. "This is Quinn. She is our very special Battle queen. She leads a band of soldiers that nearly never fail. She is a very serious warrior, and she trusts that you will all listen." Quinn looked at all of them. "it will take a lot of shaping to get these kiddos to be warriors. But I think I can manage it." She commented. "Finnally, Ocarina." Minte pointed at the gentlest lady of the bunch. "She is a great Archess. Mess with her, and her arrows will find a good point to pierce you." Minte took a deep breath. "Are you ready to commence training?" "training?!" Said all the girls, bewildered. "You didnt think you were chosen to eat grapes all day and sleep did you?" Wyvernai challenged. "Well n-" "good." Wyvernai snapped. "Then officially, your training has begun." **Author's note: hey everyone! tis me, Kendra! Wow that took a long time for the second chapter. Again, send me suggestions! THX!**

  15. Friskyfur sat in the Nursery, gently licking her kit with soft soothing strokes. She looked up from her washing when she saw Lushleaf pad back into camp.

     

    ((New Charrie! O.o

     

    Lushleaf

    Brown shecat with creamy marks green eyes

    Warrior of Destinyclan

    Loving

    MATELESS))

     

    Lushleaf returned with two mouse and a small snow-incrusted (SP??) rabbit. She laid the pieces on the pitifully small freshkill pile and took a small thrush to the hollowed area to eat.

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