BlackJaguar Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 I made a petpage version of my staff blog story (on Assassin) and made several boards and look what I got: Assassin_Nation 26/07/2009: 380 pageviews 27/07/2009: 160 pageviews 28/07/2009: 30 pageviews Plus I've submitted it to NT hoping to get published. Another fine way of advertising TDN.. b) EDIT Season 2 plot line is done. Currently proof-reading Chapter 1 and typing Chapter 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deepti M. Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Congrats! :) Hopefully you'll be able to get in, I'm sure it's a great story! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackJaguar Posted July 27, 2009 Author Share Posted July 27, 2009 Thanks.. It's already on our staff blog but I placed it at Assassin nation's homepage too... Second season will be posted once I finished thinking about the complete plot... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tempdisplay Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 I'm getting confused, I don't know who's male or female now LOL Can I say "great story MAN" now or do I have read it first. I'll edit this post or repost if someone has posted after me when I've read it. *off to Assasin's Petpage* You should check out Victoria's Vase (click anywhere on my siggy) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caliama Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Yay! I hope you get in! I need to go read your story now. =) *runs off* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tempdisplay Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 I've read the first two chapters and bookmaked to page so I can get back to it. I was going to post this on my comment after I've read the whole thing but I can't help it. So far, it ok, would be what I'd say if it wasn't brilliant. I not a fan of the BattleDome(I'm not good at it or can be bothered to be :*) or Battle stuff, however I really like this, I like the whole TDN thing, Sir Gemely :D, I mention him in my story as well, (Victoria's vase- feel free to check it out ^_^) he'll be famous when our stories get published in the NT *fingers crossed* so I'll get back to reading it when I xan, I should be done by tomorrow. Oh and another season, cool :D Oh, I like the action moments and it teaches you lots of battle stuff, it's kind of like a guide, advert and cool action story all wrapped in one. Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deepti M. Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 I finally stopped being lazy and I read it, and it's an amazing story. :O I'm sure it'll get in. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackJaguar Posted July 27, 2009 Author Share Posted July 27, 2009 I'm getting confused, I don't know who's male or female now LOL Can I say "great story MAN" now or do I have read it first. I'll edit this post or repost if someone has posted after me when I've read it. *off to Assasin's Petpage* You should check out Victoria's Vase (click anywhere on my siggy) yes, I'll check your story too and just reading the first few paragraphs make me say "nice! a detective story!". Yay! I hope you get in! I need to go read your story now. =) *runs off* I finally stopped being lazy and I read it, and it's an amazing story. :O I'm sure it'll get in. :) Thanks you very much! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tempdisplay Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 I like it.. i really do. I like the action moments, i could imagen the pets in their battle stances, I like the around Neopia theme, the pics were hilarious, especially the Brain Tree. I like those to pets who work everywhere what else do I like... anyway basically, IT ROCKED. And you're making a second season, cool. I want to be a staff member now, then again I have no strong pet :laughingsmley: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caliama Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 I just read the first chapter and marked off where I should start reading tomorrow. It's sooooo amazing!! I liked it how Bloody Mir was always being randomly attacked. xD When he was attacked by the bruce, I couldn't help laughing because it was so unexpected! =P Or when Kikito throws the snowball and hits the lenny. So good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FutureTXTurkey Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 Well your story is pwnsome. But surely I already told you that after I read it on the staff blog? So I'll try to be a little more helpful than just saying it's good again, maybe do a little proof reading? I'll PM or Email you any corrections I make. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tempdisplay Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 Oh, forgot to add, I thought BM was the Shenkuu pet, the things on the petpages make it really look like they're actually BD Challengers, I was fooled. And I liked the suprise turn of events. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephie23 Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 I didnt even know about it!! So this page totally worked as advertising as well! :) *runs off to check it out* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackJaguar Posted July 28, 2009 Author Share Posted July 28, 2009 I like it.. i really do. I like the action moments, i could imagen the pets in their battle stances, I like the around Neopia theme, the pics were hilarious, especially the Brain Tree. I like those to pets who work everywhere what else do I like... anyway basically, IT ROCKED. And you're making a second season, cool. I want to be a staff member now, then again I have no strong pet :laughingsmley: you don't actually need a strong pet.. migahut and sigmax didn't battle on the story.. :P well, i guess you better try applying for staff. :P I just read the first chapter and marked off where I should start reading tomorrow. It's sooooo amazing!! I liked it how Bloody Mir was always being randomly attacked. xD When he was attacked by the bruce, I couldn't help laughing because it was so unexpected! =P Or when Kikito throws the snowball and hits the lenny. So good! if it's fight scenes you want then there will be more.. :D Well your story is pwnsome. But surely I already told you that after I read it on the staff blog? So I'll try to be a little more helpful than just saying it's good again, maybe do a little proof reading? I'll PM or Email you any corrections I make. Thank you so much FTX! XD that would be a great help.. Oh, forgot to add, I thought BM was the Shenkuu pet, the things on the petpages make it really look like they're actually BD Challengers, I was fooled. And I liked the suprise turn of events. The shenkuu armour that assassin is wearing used to belong to Mir. that plot twist actually came to my mind while i was taking a shower :laughingsmley: I didnt even know about it!! So this page totally worked as advertising as well! :) *runs off to check it out* well, since TDN has been mentioned a lot of times.. it works well as advertisement..:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaryk Posted July 30, 2009 Share Posted July 30, 2009 Great story! I'm not really into the whole battle thing that much, but I really liked it anyway. It was very fast-paced, and it looks quite a bit bit better now that it has been edited. Good job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackJaguar Posted July 30, 2009 Author Share Posted July 30, 2009 Great story! I'm not really into the whole battle thing that much, but I really liked it anyway. It was very fast-paced, and it looks quite a bit bit better now that it has been edited. Good job! Thank you very much. It is a bit fast-paced but it's understandable since they are getting invaded.. :P Here is something you should watch out for Season 2: 1. Additional New Characters (from new staffs) 2. Mystery/Forensics (there is a bit) 3. More battles vs. strong opponents 4. Adventure (well, it is a journey) 5. Romance/Drama (yes there will be) 6. Humour (hopefully I can think of something funny) 7. Another plot twist (so better read until the end) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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